Tuesday, August 16, 2011
Small excerpt from my novel. Please let me know what emotions my characters are feeling?
He entranced every heightened and magnified sense Alora had, making him all the more harder to resist, it had been centuries since she had felt intoxicated by a man, especially on this level. Taking a second to look up into Blake's familiar green eyes, their gazes connected. Her lips were inches away from his as they continued to admire one another, slow dancing to the romantic song. Everything surrounding her seemed to disappear into a blur while all she could focus on was the perfect entity that was Blake. Unable to resist any longer, Alora seductively moved her lips closer to his, listening to his heart beat faster in tune with her desire, his ragged breathing echoes in her ears as the pion erupts when their lips connect. Feeling fire in her soul, she was hardly able to simmer the heat that could overpower her at any moment, placing her hand on the back of his neck and running her fingers through his smooth hair, the sparks reignited, seemingly jumping at every touch. The music was drowned out by Blake's racing heart and short breaths as he pulled Alora closer into him while his hands travelled around her body. The heat radiating from his body clashed into her cool skin, sending chills down her spine, it was like nothing she had ever felt before. Their soft kisses overflowed into pionate ones as the lust they felt for each other reached an apex, Alora had to feel more of the warmth he emanated, gliding her hands from his neck slowly down his shirt, feeling his hidden muscular abdomen, without restraint she reached underneath his shirt and slowly pulled it over his head to expose his bare chest to her. The heat of his body as he pressed into hers invigorated every sensation in her body, slightly stinging her cold skin. Caressing his face as their pionate kisses erupt into a frenzy, Alora felt ready to give in to her desire. It was one of the most tempting and lustful moments she had ever encountered, even her time spent with Gurion had never been as raw as every aspect in this moment was right now, in her six-hundred years of life she had never wanted a man more than she did right now. Slipping his bare arm around her waist, the intensity of the kissing became vigorous as Blake pushed Alora up against the wall, it was obvious his appetite for her grew stronger after every kiss. Blake slipped off the first strap of Alora's perfect little black dress as he began to deliver fierce kisses to her chest sending exhilarating tingles throughout her entire being. A frantic knock coming from the front door interrupted the intensity before Blake had time to get to the remaining strap holding her dress to her body.
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